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My Pony Story "Colored Shadows" is NOT a main Project! It is a Doodle Story and I will not put much Effort in it.

It contains the official Ponies (the Canon Characters) and a lot of OC´s.
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It takes Place somewhen after Season 2.

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It was supposed to be a Doodle Comic.

MLP Comic (needs a Titel) Page 001 by JB-Pawstep MLP Comic (needs a Titel) Page 002 by JB-Pawstep MLP Comic (Titel unsure) Page 003 by JB-Pawstep MLP Comic (needs a Titel) Page 004 by JB-Pawstep MLP Comic (needs a Titel) Page 005 by JB-Pawstep MLP -Colored Shadows Page 006 by JB-Pawstep MLP -Colored Shadows Page 007 by JB-Pawstep MLP -Colored Shadows Page 008 by JB-Pawstep

From now on, it will be posted as Text with Pictures.

:MLP -Colored Shadows Page 009 by JB-Pawstep

The Group of Ponies were on their Way. The Newcommer Tomato Glitter leaded them through the dark Sky. During the Night became darker and darker, a Pony in a wooden, small House was reading a Book. The Pony had longer Ears. Maybe she wasn´t a Pony? A Donkey maybe? The Titel was "How to do Magic, without being a Unicorn". Concentrated on the Text, she didn´t notice how fast the Time was running. Her Eyes stopped on two words that caught her attention.

"Dream Connection"


"Find a dreaming one and wake him up...

...different World... Connected... " and some strange Words, that she can´t read...

"To invite one, you need some Lightning. By the Sound of Thunder, you have to clapp the left Fronthoof on a Stone. Do that three Times"

The grayish blue Donkey-like Pony was surprised. A Storm was rising! So why not give it a Try?
She waited for the first Thundersound. There it was. She clapped with her Hoof.
The second! She did it again.
And the third! Clapp!

...nothing happend.
Stupid Magic by JB-Pawstep
"Stupid Magic", she layed the Book back and went to her Bed.
Sad about her non working Magic, she closed her Eyes and fall asleep.
Another Lightning flashed through the Night. Thunder followed loudly.
Suddenly the Book opend! There was a Line, that the sad Donkey-Pony didn´t read.

"The Stardust-Ponies will fullfill your Magic"
A Kitties Dream by JB-Pawstep

The Ponies reached the stormy Aarea. Their Balloon was swirled alot.
"It´s not save to travel in your Balloon during this Storm!", Rainbow Dash had no Trouble continue flying but she was scared her Friends could get hurt.
"You´re right. We should rest till it´s over", the darker blue Pegasus called. So they landed. They just passed some Moutnains. 
"Where could we rest? It doesn´t look like the Storm will be over that fast..", Twilight asked and watched the rainy Sky.Little Rest -COLLAB by JB-Pawstep



The Rain begann to fall harder.
"There must be something to hide anywhere!", Apple Jack said. A light colored Pegasus with blue, gray and black Mane and Tail landed in front of them: "I knew, I saw something! What are you doing here, Guys?".Pixel Light by Cirorin


"Light Swirl?", the dark blue Pegasus, his Name was Silver Flash, seems to know that Pegasus. Same for Rainbow Dash: "Hey, didn´t I saw you on the last Show of the Wonder Bolts?".
"Yes you did!! I sat next to you and offered you Popcorn! And you took some from me", Light Swirl was happy.
"Oh.. Yeah I remember. The Popcorn was tasty. Where the Hell did you get that Popcorn from?!"

"I really don´t want to interfire, but we can´t stay here...", Fluttershy checked her wet Wings. Wet Feathers -COLLAB by JB-Pawstep
"She´s right! Come with me! I found a nice Cave, were is Room for all of us!", Light Swirl brought them to her Cave. All the Ponies sat there and listend to the Rain outside.
"And why are you here? Cloudsdale is a bit far from here.. Are you alone?", Twilight asked while Rarity cried because of the Rain that had ruined her Styling.
"Don´t you read the News Paper? There were Pirates! They had seen that Ship multible Times but nothing really happend. I want to know. I never was on an Adventure and that´s my big Chance!".
"Adventures can be dangerous, you know", explained Tomato Glitter.
"Tomato! Maybe these Pirates have something to do with the Death of King Cortex!", Rainbow Dash called.
"Do you think so?", she asked shy.
"Rainbow Dash could be right!", Light Swirl squealed.
"But don´t we have to check on them... somewhere near an Ocean?", Applejack asked.
"No, no.... you really read no News Paper, do you?", Light Swirl laughed, "These are SKY Pirates. They are a Group of Pegasus and Unicorn Ponies that fly a Ship".They are SKY Pirates! by JB-Pawstep


"A-and aren´t they dangerous? Do they have Weapons?", Fluttershy shivered.

"Maybe they are..", Light Swirl laughed.
"We should rest a bit so we will be fit, when we can continue our Journey", Tomato Glitter said.

Another Flash lighed the Night. The Donkey just woke up. A strange Dream, she just had, was in her Mind. Ghostly and sparkling Pony dancing in Starlight. She should´nt read so much Books about strange Magic. She just turned aroung to try to sleep again, when somepony knocked on her Door.
Who could that be? In the Middle of the Night! At first she wasn´t sure, if the Knocking was just her Imagination but then it knocked again!
"Eh... W-who is there?", she was a bit scared. She actually doesn´t have much Visiters. Hesitantly she got up and listen to the Door. Maybe it was just the Branch of a Tree? Why didn´t she got an Answer?
She opend and a gray Pony lay in front of her, wet from the Rain and scared. "Oh my Gosh.. are you alright? What happend to you?", she asked the wet Pony.
"I .. I absolutly don´t know. Please, may I enter?".
"Sure!"
"Thank you", the Newcommer entered the wooden House.
"What do you mean, you don´t know, what happend to you? Did someone attack you?"
"..I wasn´t attacked. There were some sparkling two Ghosts, I know, it sounds weird, and they kissed me. I don´t know what happens. But I feel strange. Where am I?".
"You should take a little Rest. You are at Teardrop Mountan. Its very close to King Cortex Kindom".
"Who?"
"King Cortex. Well.. he died some Days ago. It´s actually Prince Cortex new Kindom now".
"hm..."
"You don´t know, what I am talking about, right?".
"I actually don´t even know my Name. Something is very strange. A-And I feel like, I´m in a wrong Body".
"You don´t know your Name? Sounds like an Amnesia! Maybe you got striked by a Lightning (Author::trollface:)!".
"Maybe..."
"Anyway. My Name´s J.B.. You can stay for a While, if you want to". "Thanks", the new Pony said and felt asleep on a fluffy Carpet.Sleeping on a Carpet by JB-Pawstep


The Night was long and rainy. Even in the Morning, there still were some gray Clouds. "Should we leave now?", Rarity asked her Friends. "What, when the Storm isn´t really over yet?", Fluttershy shivered quite. 
"I will have a look!", Light Swirl ran out of the Cave and spread her Wings out. 
"Stop! You may be a Pegasus but it´s still to dangerous to check the Sky all alone! You just told us about some Pirates, that might be here somewhere!", Rainbow Dash followed her and stoped her from starting to fly. "Well... Let´s clear the Sky together then?", Light Swirl asked shy. "That´s no big Deal for me!", Rainbow Dash just wanted to jump into the Air, when saw a darker Shadow that shows up on one of the dark Clouds. "Hey! Something´s over there!"
Rainbow Dash -Somethings above there! by JB-Pawstep

Suddenly there came a hard Yet of Water from the Clouds. The Yet was that Strong, it flushed Rainbow Dash back into the Cave. "W-What happend?", Twilight was shocked.
"Is it raining that hard?", Fluttershy asked.
"It´s not Rain! It was Somepony!", Rainbow Dash got on her Hooves.
All her Friends glared at the Mouth of the Cave. A dark Shape of a Pony in Front of them, "Is one of you Twilight Sparkle?", the Stranger asked.
"Who want´s to know that?", Silver Flash and Rainbow Dash stand protective in Front of their Friends.

The Stranger didn´t answer.                                                                                                                              You will come with us! by JB-Pawstep
"I-I bet he is one of the Pirates!", Light Swirl whispered to Rarity.
"And he is not alone..", Twilight noticed.
"The purple one is it", one of them grinted. "You will come with us!", his Friend said.

Both were Unicorn Stallions. One of them was dark blue with Fire-like Mane and Tail, the other one was dark Purple.

"You can try, kidnapping her!", Rainbow Dash growled. One of the two Ponies targed the Group with his Horn. A strong Water Yet shooted out of it. The Ponies in the Cave tried to hide, but there was no Escape. The Cave was filled with Water in no Time. The other one used some Magic, to let Twilight float over the Water Surface.
"There she is", he laughed. The Stallions grabed Twilight and run outside. 
Kidnapped Twilight by JB-Pawstep


"Waiiiit!", Light Swirl forced herself to fight in the Water. She managed to reach the Entrance of the Cave. Excited, she shaked her wet Wings. The Stallions were gone. And so was Twilight. But what was that? She saw a big Shadow over her. That wasn´t a Cloud! A Ship! THESE two Ponies were Pirates! She didn´t hesitate. She flew above and entered the Ship. "I have to find Twilight!".


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The Water Masses spreaded out in the Cave. The Ponies could stand again. "They took Twilight!", Applejack called. "Light Swirl is also missing!", Silver Flash noticed.
The wet Ponies searched their Way out of the Cave and shaked their water soaked Manes. "What the Hell do they want with Twilight?", Rainbow Dash asked. "Maybe they need her, because of her Magic Talents? Well.. that´s why I was looking for her...", Tomato Glitter explained. "You could be right! We have to find them!", Pinkie Pie cried, "Maybe they will cut up her Horn and use it themselves!!".

Somewhere over the Clouds, Twilight shivered and opened her Eyes. She lay on a wooden Floor. "Where did you take me to?".
"Don´t worry, we won´t hurt you", the blue Unicorn told her, "My Name is Hero Blaze and the one, who carried you up here, is Gloat.
"Gloat Mclol", the dark purple Pony laughed, "and we are Pirates".
"P-Pirates!", Twilight was shocked.
A golden Pegasus with large Wings showed up. "This is our Leader", Hero Blaze explained, "He is called Goldrush". 
Goldrush stand next to the crouched Twilight, "This is Twilight Sparkle?", he asked his Comrades.
"She is it", Gloat answered. "Great. Welcome to the Cloud Pirates. From now on, you are Part of my Crew".From now on, you are Part of my Crew -WIP COLLAB by JB-Pawstep


"I am what?" The Guest of the Donkey couldn´t believe it. Did this Donkey just call him a PONY?, "That´s impossible! I am pretty sure, I... I had Paws in stead of these clumsy Things on my Legs!"
"Those are Hooves".
"What the Hell happend to me!?", he howled.
"Can´t you remember anything?".
"There are some Things, I remember. I was dreaming. And their were these two sparkling.. Wait! Those were Ponies!".
"Sparking Ponies in your DREAM?", J.B. asked excited.
"Yes! And they KISSED ME!".
"Interesting..."
"Are you nuts?"
"Maybe. Well... It is possible, that it is my fault. I mean... what happend to you. I.. I could have cursed that", she said.
"How?"
"I tried, to learn some Magic".
"Magic?"
"Yes. It is usually not possible, if you are not a Unicorn. Here: Stardust Ponies!".
The male Pony checked the Text. His Eyes widened, "So YOU are responsible for what happend to me!? I am not suposed to be a Pony! I want home! Now!".
"Sorry. I don´t know, how to send you home again..", J.B. said nervous.
"What? Than you have to find out!".
"I will try! I promise!".
"Good", not amused, the male Pony set on the Carpet again.
"We should find a Name for you", J.B. suggested, "I have to call you somehow, when I am talking to you".
"Fine"
"What about Rainy Cloud?"
"What?"
"Your Fur is gray like a Raincloud, you know".
"That´s not a Name!".
"Maybe Smokey. Or Muddy Hooves. Or Cat-Scream".
"Cat-Scream?".
"Cat-Scream Blue! Would be a nice Name for you".
"Wha-"
"Your Cutie Mark looks like a blue screaming Cat".
"MY WHAAAT?!!".Best Bro Brony by JB-Pawstep
"You like that Name?"
"No!"
"Naa... Then I will just call you Riki".
"I think, my Name is my MINOR PROBLEM!".



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Schrodinger-Excidium's avatar
Wonderful story. I used Google Translator to have read itLove